Wednesday, September 21, 2011

Quickwrite #5: Fairy tale

My favorite fairy tale is Cinderella. The reason why I like it is because it reminds me when I was little and I used to dress up like Cinderella and it is so nice that she gets a happy ending and does not end up with the same,awful life. What I would do to make it more better is by describing what happened to her parents and how she got a stepmother. My least favorite fairy tale is  Jack and the Beanstalk. The reason why I don't like it is because it keeps saying the same words like "Fe, fi , fo ,fum". I don't like the rhymes. The only way to make it better is instead of a goose that lays eggs, make it an angel and Jack saves her from being eaten later on.